Quick review:
The music is not what I would normally listen to, but I still liked it and thought it suited the movie (although I maybe would have used a different song for the credits).  The video quality, I thought was very impressive, although it is 470 MB for 8 minutes of action!  The kills were good, although I'm not much of a fan of fragmovies unless they are all very good kills (most of yours were, some weren't).  The bit at the start I thought was good, although it would have been better had it lead to something, for example the start of my movie I made a while ago (using Windows Movie Maker, I should add 

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http://youtube.com/watch?v=eipXPM8wZLE).  I liked the effect/s used for the intro section, but as I said, it doesn't really lead to anything.
Overall, a very good movie with a good choice of music and good quality kills 
 
P.S. You're quite the nicklamer, morda 
