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mp_black_gold

Post by Paragon » June 9th, 2011, 4:40 pm

My very first map .
Its an oilrig with few additional structures around it.

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[50 % done ] . How does it look ?
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Post by Paragon » June 9th, 2011, 5:28 pm

How about this one ? :?

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/82 ... 62584.jpg/
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Post by waywaaaard » June 9th, 2011, 5:31 pm

Looks good :)
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Re: mp_black_gold

Post by XeloX » June 9th, 2011, 5:53 pm

pretty impressive for a first map, bit dark though
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Post by Nekoneko » June 9th, 2011, 5:59 pm

looks cool.
Didnt know you were making a map. ^^
Pretty fast xD
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Post by Drofder2004 » June 9th, 2011, 8:18 pm

No so keen on the palm trees, but looks pretty good... and amazing for a first map.
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Post by Pedsdude » June 9th, 2011, 9:25 pm

Look reasonable, can't really say more than that when you've only provided one very dark screenshot!
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Re: mp_black_gold

Post by Paragon » June 10th, 2011, 9:46 am

Thanks all. And i changed sky & light.So you can see more.

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Does it look better now ?
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Post by Soviet » June 10th, 2011, 6:14 pm

Make the water extend for a few thousand units in all directions.
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Post by Rezil » June 10th, 2011, 6:24 pm

And add some exp fog so the edges of the water don't show, then it'll look good.
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Post by Drofder2004 » June 10th, 2011, 8:04 pm

1. More water (As Sov said)
2. Exp Fog (As Rez said)
3. The island could do with some more vertices and natural curve land.
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Post by Soviet » June 10th, 2011, 10:34 pm

Oh right, I forgot to mention that it looks great for your first map.
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Re: mp_black_gold

Post by Vartazian » June 11th, 2011, 12:06 am

I have played this map with him a few times now. It's a very great map. Requires some tough fps switches including 250-333-250 and 250-125-333 rpg strafe bounces. Huge bounces. Great map. I agree though, more water would make it feel like your in the middle of the ocean ^_^ I believe this map is os only atm. He said he might change it though.
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Re: mp_black_gold

Post by Paragon » June 11th, 2011, 2:16 pm

Drofder2004 wrote:1. More water (As Sov said)
2. Exp Fog (As Rez said)
3. The island could do with some more vertices and natural curve land.
Hm , could you tell about exp fog more in-depth (how to add it ) , please :S
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Re: mp_black_gold

Post by Rezil » June 11th, 2011, 2:20 pm

http://wiki.modsrepository.com/index.ph ... #SetExpFog

Applies to CoD4 up until setVolFog, which is a CoD5 function.
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