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Feedback

Posted: March 17th, 2011, 4:38 pm
by Hoogie
Opinions w/ reason & tips are appreciated. Will eventually animate this.

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Re: Feedback

Posted: March 17th, 2011, 5:17 pm
by Hoogie
Any suggestions on what to change at text?

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 17th, 2011, 7:29 pm
by Hoogie
I had that on it indeed. Had to go back to a previous version because i fucked it up and forgot the put it back. Thanks for noticing ^^

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 17th, 2011, 8:47 pm
by TheduckerZz
I am not an expert, but for me the letters could have some color,maybe a little more white i dont know.I dont want to fuck up your picture :D but the gray looks so boring and arid :(

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 12:23 am
by Hoogie
w/ noise:
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w/o noise:
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Re: Feedback

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 12:45 am
by Hoogie
Why is it poor and wtf is a chamfer?

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 1:16 am
by Hoogie
You called it 'caps' when i replied, what it's also called in the program ;)

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 2:11 pm
by Hoogie
KillerSam wrote:
Hoogie wrote:You called it 'caps' when i replied
What :?:
Or not, apparently xD

Somehow i knew what it was even tough i never heard of the word. Probably cause of the rest of the sentence then. I would bet i read caps, anyway won't look good if you make it larger because when you add that the text becomes bolder and bolder. Will fuck up the font.

Think this already looks better tough.

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Re: Feedback

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 2:30 pm
by Hoogie
KillerSam wrote:Why does it need to become bolder? Can you not add the chamfer inside of the existing letters? essentially making the front surface smaller?
Don't think you can. I'm not really good with C4D so there might be a option somewhere for it, maybe someone else knows?

If i add it on the default settings tough it adds like a layer around it which makes the curve larger.

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 10:11 pm
by <LT>YosemiteSam[NL]
I agree, that last picture looks much nicer.
But imo the text and flower don't blend very well, I mean they look like 2 seperate images instead of 1 logo.
Maybe you can "hang" the flower between the FL and O or something like that.

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 2:10 pm
by Hoogie
Tried that but looked awefull. Probably because of my lack of skills at C4D.

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 10:40 pm
by F |Madness| U
Last picture is by far best one so far, however I don't like how the F in Flower and U in Production align under each other into one line , looks kinda weird in my opinion.

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 11:33 pm
by <LT>YosemiteSam[NL]
xSnipeZx wrote:however I don't like how the F in Flower and U in Production align under each other into one line , looks kinda weird in my opinion.
Maybe that has a meaning .... FU ? :wink:

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 11:45 pm
by Hoogie
<LT>YosemiteSam[NL] wrote:
xSnipeZx wrote:however I don't like how the F in Flower and U in Production align under each other into one line , looks kinda weird in my opinion.
Maybe that has a meaning .... FU ? :wink:
Didn't go that far but i did line those up on purpose.

Re: Feedback

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 12:15 am
by F |Madness| U
<LT>YosemiteSam[NL] wrote:
xSnipeZx wrote:however I don't like how the F in Flower and U in Production align under each other into one line , looks kinda weird in my opinion.
Maybe that has a meaning .... FU ? :wink:
My clan tags are also F | U, coincidence? I think not! Illuminati.

And oh Hoogie, well I personally think it looks weird the way that they are lined up (on the previous pictures it wasn't as noticeable, you could see where the F ended and the U began).