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mp_office

Post by Reality » May 24th, 2011, 6:02 pm

This is my second jump map, mp_office its built of 3 stages.. this map is quite easy is oldschool but can be tricky at some parts. This is a beta so please report any bugs, bad bounces etc. please give positive feedback and criticism. thankyou :) it also has a few secrets, but i'll let you find them ;)

Download: http://www.gamefront.com/files/20368422/mp_office.zip

also because im not sure how to do it.. how do you add an image to the maps loading screen?

Okay this a screenshot of the start (spawn) to get past this room is a secret and you have to find, a clue.. stand by the picture. ;)

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Heres one of the rooms:


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Re: mp_office

Post by Reality » May 24th, 2011, 6:38 pm

Thanks, but this is my second map.. i'm not experienced with creating maps, using triggers, lighting, models etc. so i still have alot to learn.. and what prefabs in screenshot 2?..

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Re: mp_office

Post by [SoE]_Zaitsev » May 24th, 2011, 7:04 pm

First screenshot looked indeed promising but then you switched to a whole other area which doesn't look like an office at all. Don't go that way, do it different than most first time mappers.
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Re: mp_office

Post by Drofder2004 » May 24th, 2011, 7:37 pm

First screenshot looks nice and neat, my only real concern is texture usage.
You need to learn how to manipulate the texture as to avoid problems such as the black lines on the desks.
(Rotate the textures)

Second screenshot.
My first thought was as KS said, wtf @ the prefab/model. The tower is just toally random.
The room is also lcking something, maybe a good light source, the walls just seem a little bland. I am happy to see you added the 4 simple beams below the wall platform, if only just to add a little more realism to the 'floating platform' style we see.


Also, a lot of floor space, not alot of anything going on.. add something down there, anything. Just some random boxes, some bins, anything...
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Re: mp_office

Post by Rezil » May 24th, 2011, 8:51 pm

Screenshot 1:
You totally rippied me off, you prick!

Screenshot 2:
Never mind, you clearly have no clue what an office should look like.

All kidding aside, what's with the 2nd screen?
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Re: mp_office

Post by S3x! Th1ng » May 25th, 2011, 12:41 am

hi i set your map on may server but i heve problem with climb :cry: because i heve linux server end he is got problem with climb i must set fps on 30 can you fix that end set normal climb my xf is thebeni26 :mrgreen:

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Re: mp_office

Post by Lawless » May 25th, 2011, 10:29 pm

When I played this map earlier on my mates server it had the J_head error [my second most hated mapping error]
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Re: mp_office

Post by Reality » May 26th, 2011, 7:40 pm

updated new file:)

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Post by waywaaaard » May 27th, 2011, 11:06 am

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Re: mp_office

Post by Nekoneko » May 27th, 2011, 11:34 am

Had no clue what to do at some points.
And some jumps seem very hard oO
like.. the first bounce.
How do you get to that platform??
I just bounced from where I was standing.

And another one @2nd pic. There was a huge gap, which i couldnt make :shock:

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