Hi i just did this and i need advice on whats bad and good because ive just started editing and want to get good

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D26q5ai0 ... ideo_title

what do u guys think of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a17pT9RlIqs skip to 0:48 for the elevator

hi guys just wanted to know what you thorght of the quality also the clips and fx of the miniedit can u also give me a bit of recognition coz my work is under rated http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hrM8phLiqao

Thanks guys for the help

Hi guys i just got a new setup and recorded some demos i had please can u tell me what u think of it feedback is a must so i can improve and get better http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rOY2aQR-KA